The Essay Plan

Topic: Exploration can create conflict and misunderstanding

Thesis Sentence: In fact, according to the histories, in exploration's ways, British have many troubles with Canada, Australia and Hong Kong. No doubt, exploration can create conflict and misunderstanding. The exploration must be transparent, the purpose should be clear and the basic of the exploration is equality for each others.

Introduction: The background of British exploration. The British government explored Canada, Australia and Hong Kong. The 3 wrong way of exploration about England coursed the conflict and the misunderstanding about this exploration

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Topic Sentence: people depend on the resources. It is a truth that never changes. The exploration must be transparent. Otherwise it will let people misunderstand the explorers want to capture resources from the country which was explored.

Body: The explorers from England explored Canada secretly. The Native People thought they tried to transport the resources. The Native People misunderstand them.

Concluding Sentence: The exploration is not transparent. It will course the misunderstanding. The problem is serious. The real exploration must be a correct way.

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Topic Sentence: The purpose of the exploration must be clear. If the purpose is not very well. The exploration will have a conflict.

Body: British government sent people to Australia to explore. They didn't help them again. The Native People in Australia misunderstand them and thought they wanted to colony.

Concluding Sentence: The way of exploration is important for a country. British should made a communication with the Native People. They must have a clear purpose. It will not course a conflict.

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Topic Sentence: The most terrible thing is the war in the world. If the two countries have many differences, sometimes, the exploration will create a war and the misunderstanding. It was a kind of the conflict for both of the countries. The basic is equality for exploration.

Body: British explored Hong Kong and colonized Hong Kong. The Qing dynasty can not accept the way to exploration. The war between them started.

Concluding Sentence: The wrong way to exploration coursed the conflict and the misunderstanding. The exploration must establish on the basis of equality for each other.

Conclusion: There are many stories are about the exploration. England explored Canada, Australia and Hong Kong. The exploration can create conflict and misunderstanding. The most incredible is that coursed a war. British is a great country which is good at the exploration. In the world, there is no other countries have the same feat about exploration. The real lands of England were so small. British use the exploration to develop the country.

Restatement of Thesis: The way of exploration must be transparent clear and the basis is equality. There are many stories are about the exploration. England explored Canada, Australia and Hong Kong. The exploration can create conflict and misunderstanding. The most incredible is that coursed a war. England is a great country which is good at the exploration.