4/19/2009

The Final Essay

Cristine Ya

Exploration can create conflict and misunderstanding

____The exploration is important for a strong country. England was called the "Days Fall Empire" It means: the earth turns a circle, the sun of British will not down. There are so many parts of countries were colonized by British. In the middle of the 18th century, England became the most top countries of Colony. Before that, the government of British colonized Canada, Australia and Hong Kong. There are many stories happened in that time. In fact, according to the histories, in exploration's ways, British have many troubles with Canada, Australia and Hong Kong. No doubt, exploration can create conflict and misunderstanding. The exploration must be transparent, the purpose should be clear and the basic of the exploration is equality for each others.

____People depend on the resources. It is a truth that never changes. The exploration must be transparent. Otherwise it will let people misunderstand the explorers want to capture resources from the country which was explored. Canada is a country which is full of the different kinds of resources. In the past, there were only small amounts of native people live there. At the same time, England had already become a strong country. Although England was a rich country, the king of British told the explorers of England to explore and carry out a transaction. They chose the wrong way that is exploration is secretly. In fact, when they arrived in Canada and explored some lands. The Native People misunderstand them and thought they wanted to capture the rich resources of Canada. The Native People was not friendly like before. They tried to chase the British away. The exploration is not transparent. It will course consider. The problem is serious. The real exploration must be a correct way.

____The purpose of the exploration must be clear. If the purpose is not very well. The exploration will have a conflict. In 18th century, British government sent a part of people to Australia. They lived in there and explored. At the beginning, the British government helped them to build the new house and find a way to live. After several years, the government didn't help them. They lived there alone. The Native People in Australia noticed the problems; they thought British were doing something for immigration activity. They thought British will control them. The Native People fight with the British for their lands. The way of exploration is important for a country. British should make a communication with the Native People. They must have a clear purpose. It will not course a conflict.

____The most terrible thing is the war in the world. If the two countries have many differences, sometimes, the exploration will create a war and the misunderstanding. It was a kind of the conflict for both of the countries. There is 8 countries explored China. After the first opium war, British government explored Hong Kong and wanted to get the emporiums of Hong Kong. They built the Concession. The Qing Dynasty Government can't accept their colony. They thought it was not a way to exploration. It was a way to colony. They got ready to against with the British. The war started. The wrong way to exploration coursed the conflict and the misunderstanding. The exploration must establish on the basis of equality for each other.

____The way of exploration must be transparent clear and the basis is equality. There are many stories are about the exploration. England explored Canada, Australia and Hong Kong. The exploration can create conflict and misunderstanding. The most incredible is that coursed a war. England is a great country which is good at the exploration. In the world, there is no other countries have the same feat about exploration. The real lands of England were so small. British use the exploration to develop the country.

1 comment:

  1. Focus 3/4
    Content 4/4
    Organization 3.5/4
    Usage 3/4
    Style 3/4

    You really put a lot of effort into your essay. Congratulations.

    16.5/20 x2 = 33/40

    Wow!

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