
There are two hunters which are wearing the fur.They have their own shotguns.They are discussing something .I can't see their expression.I feel they are atrocious.Their hands look like very strong.their trousers is also full of fur.Maybe they always stay outside.I guess they are carrying out a transaction.It is about the fur trade.I hate their behavior.They are merciless.They will understand they are wrong.
http://www.colonie.org/historian/indianfur.gif
The picture shows the early Indian Traders.In a ropey house.There are 2 native people woke on making the fur.One of the native people hold a dipper.He tries to get some water from the jar.A dash of water in the fur.He also lights fear for the wood.The other man is making the size for the fur.They are doing the clean for the fur.They will fur trader soon.

The picture shows the early Indian Traders.In a ropey house.There are 2 native people woke on making the fur.One of the native people hold a dipper.He tries to get some water from the jar.A dash of water in the fur.He also lights fear for the wood.The other man is making the size for the fur.They are doing the clean for the fur.They will fur trader soon.

The Native People are talking with one person who is the business man for the fur.The man wants to sell the fur to Native People.He holds the fur and introduces the benefit of the fur.The Native People are looking at the fur and thinking about the words of the man said.On the back of the man,there are many transporters are transporting the fur.The packet which is full of the fur look very heavy.The man tries to sell out all of the fur.


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A very good job! Very thoughtful!